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Explizit LyricisT
12-10-2007, 01:57 PM
Its time to get gully…….
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(approaching a crowd awaiting his speech, pauses for a moment looks through the crowd, clears his voice and speaks)
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Who ever thinks they better, regret dat their contenders, I spread em like legs, revolve to the barrel and end em with millis of lead/
Its sillier said, but when done, they pity the dead, don’t act shity cause ya city filled with sissies that fled/
Can’t even talk on jacks no more, every number got listening feds, like fat bitches at barbeques that can’t wait ta be fed/
But I’ll make sure they eat, bring the cake to their bed, so when they wake they see red, have em lose weight put hollowness in their head/
They said I was born to get souls from entering the dead, which means they live forever but somehow I’ve tortured them instead/
You faggets aint ready to contend like entering a world that makes haste to kill you gay rappers, you mad cause im the str8 one that lead/
We came with sticks and stones, break ya bones, have you hurting, the words added extra torment your lack of faith-provoked it/
Its funny comments made to me, but I’m betoken, they talk about my sig, I put the picture their to show your broken/
Don’t rely on whateva your hoping, your opportunities closing, I’m known to put more Greece on what’s rusted than Greeks and Romans/
You freaks are lonely, like porno flicks and your lubrication, K, Y jelly* your ass? Your useless at drops like constipation/
I rip rappers apart like hitting the Middle, that’s why I’m a champ, you brokes, brittle and ask why you’re belittled/
It aint no riddle, I’m iller than aids inside a prison or cave, and its spreading quicker than hoes, feeling themselves while giving me brains/
I’m feeling a change, these wack rappers stealing the stage and thinking bout entering the realm of kings but im sealing the way/

(Walks off stage... media going nuts asking what he means? Turns around and points at cameras)

I would talk, but why comment on your ignorance, your lingering but your persistance blow away in a single glimpse/
i read ya reviews and how you were amused at my single hit, but i got longevity so your papers crinkled in my fist/
you talked about how dudes wife gave me a kiss, and said i cheated on my girl but i never arranged for it/
I'm just here to destroy, thats my main on lists, so stand by and watch as i eat mcs alive like I payed for this/

(Attorneys block out media as he walks away from the crowd and media and enters arena for the eternal bout)



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* another word for jelly is preserve or conserve!!

http://rapfeinds.com/showthread.php?p=13675#post13675 (http://rapfeinds.com/showthread.php?p=13675#post13675)<O:p></O:p>
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http://rapfeinds.com/showthread.php?p=13676#post13676 (http://rapfeinds.com/showthread.php?p=13676#post13676)

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Explizit LyricisT
12-11-2007, 10:29 PM
wake up!!!

ART
12-11-2007, 10:55 PM
I've gotta Give You Props For This Joint Shit was Fire..

Explizit LyricisT
12-12-2007, 03:52 PM
Thanks Fam!!! upping!!

hiroshima deux
12-13-2007, 10:14 PM
word mane, ya got some multies on ya...

Explizit LyricisT
12-15-2007, 10:48 AM
thanks fa the feed, upping!!!

JøëL..
12-15-2007, 11:46 AM
pretty good piece right here flow was a little strechted but im not gonna stress that for now..some nice multis in here rhyme scheme could have been fixed..but it was good as it was..nice job..keep at it man and make sure you add some better wordplay next time that should help it out to make it more exciting..


rtf on Dragon's Tail.

Sev
12-16-2007, 07:45 PM
this was cool, flowed good, had some cool multies and creative lines and punches.. good job keep droppin son

Its funny comments made to me, but I’m betoken, they talk about my sig, I put the picture their to show your broken/
Don’t rely on whateva your hoping, your opportunities closing, I’m known to put more Greece on what’s rusted than Greeks and Romans/

^ nice