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[mrgetinit]

To be honest I feel nothing but anger and rage,
So the only thing I can do is put this pen to the page,
So instead of breaking out the Tech and making niggas bleed,
I'll just pick up a book and comprehend what I read,
I got this real fucking urge to use weapons and shit,
But I know I'll do life just for killing a bitch,
Niggas keep talking dirty they think they safe,
But they feet keep moving when they see me like they running a race,
I'll just say fuck it cuz I trying to get paid,
Cuz time is getting short like a midget with a hand grenade,
So I'm walking through the hood like a mystic with a nymbus of light,
I'm not perfect,uppity, or better I'm just trying to do right

[Sev]

This was dope, by far the best one uve posted, the opener was hot u stayed consistent throught till the end. nice work homie.

[L-C-K]

Cuz time is getting short like a midget with a hand grenade,
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good work on this. is there no open mic type section here? but anyways i thought this was a good piece, alotta emotion in it, made it worth the read. Stay up. keep writing

[KontaKt]

Dope drop man well writein could have been a little longer but it was dope


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So instead of breaking out the Tech and making niggas bleed,
I'll just pick up a book and comprehend what I read,

[ReaLyfe]

So instead of breaking out the Tech and making niggas bleed,
I'll just pick up a book and comprehend what I read,

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enjoyed... but the AABB rhyme scheme was too simplistic for me... you said it was a verse, but isn't this the poetry section? no offense but that's how i'm judging it.... none the less i liked the message.... if it was a verse, i would ask for more multies... if it was a poem i would ask for less of an simplistic rhyme scheme....def keep doin you though.... stay up