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[Exis]

if cats are a regular on rf I would prefer they left feed there , if not...leavin' comments here would be appreciated....

aint into molestin' or incest , but Ima fuck with these kids for a minute...
son an adolescent infant that's invalid , jigs springs to mind...a nigga that's idiot...
don't normally do over my family , but he's without loyalty or a fotune...
your luck needs more than clover leaves to see you create noise that's a raw tune...
this nigga was supposed to bring out a disc like half a decade ago...
and just for the record when he blows it's because he's erected in throats...
get off hova's meat 'fore you choke leech , they say you are what you eat...
chea it's been said before...
but when I target you'll feed off the heat and be a vegetable...
seek a devil's form and best believe you shall fuckin' find it...
speak one sentence more and my lines will crush your sinus...
my mind will shut your eyelids , my life is touchin' midas...
I'm the finest thing since buttered slices , and you is nothin' vital...
but sumthin' dire and far from nice , so why the fuck you write for?...
I've honed sprayed spits I mouth quick , mister stagnant hop off my tool quick...
chomp down constantly on my phrases so cats can gobble up yours bitch...
a novice comedy act for fools that spoke where comma's aint put...
attach my dopeness to your wackness to make the content more raw...
it seems vick has his jaws where your balls sit , and your hooks are just bullshit...
I launch punches with more force to literally knock down your front door kid...

I'll feed when birches drop shit...

[Sev]

but when I target you'll feed off the heat and be a vegetable...
seek a devil's form and best believe you shall fuckin' find it...
speak one sentence more and my lines will crush your sinus...
my mind will shut your eyelids , my life is touchin' midas...
^ these lines were dope as fuck also.. i was feelin..

aint into molestin' or incest , but Ima fuck with these kids for a minute...
son an adolescent infant that's invalid , jigs springs to mind...a nigga that's idiot...
don't normally do over my family , but he's without loyalty or a fotune...
word play is nice..
this nigga was supposed to bring out a disc like half a decade ago...
and just for the record when he blows it's because he's erected in throats
these were dope to..
those were my fav lines.. the whole peice was nice i was feelingg the wordplay and multis.. u got talent your by far the best on here ima feed on some more of your shit..

[Exis]

next time you say the word weak in a thread of mine you will be murked , if you can't think up new diction to spit nigga...write nothin' , as you do not know my style nor know how to read it...or even start to comprehend what the fuck this piece is in relation to...illiterate lifeforms.

[Stress]

aint into molestin' or incest , but Ima fuck with these kids for a minute...
son an adolescent infant that's invalid , jigs springs to mind...a nigga that's idiot...

lol..i can feel you here

this nigga was supposed to bring out a disc like half a decade ago...
and just for the record when he blows it's because he's erected in throats...

the humer is nice..and delivery is good..i think you ment diss instead of disc not sure tho

I'm the finest thing since buttered slices , and you is nothin' vital...
but sumthin' dire and far from nice , so why the fuck you write for?...

this is wat i like bout you...vital and write for you wouldnt think that would ryhme huh..well guess again..my mind can make it rhyme very good..


speak one sentence more and my lines will crush your sinus...
my mind will shut your eyelids , my life is touchin' midas...

prolly my fav part cuz of the flow here..the closer i was feelin to overall this is a good diss..im sure there will be another one cuz i see ppl tryna slack over some were eles if you no wat i mean..so im sure we will see a part 2 oof this...and if so i will be here to drop my comments and keep writtin and stay up fam

[Exis]

^^your perfectly wack , I've accepted it...fuck out my thread...

this nigga was supposed to bring out a disc like half a decade ago...
and just for the record when he blows it's because he's erected in throats...

the humer is nice..and delivery is good..i think you ment diss instead of disc not sure tho

...no typo here son , he has had this so called 'cd' comin' out for the last 4 years...let me know when it drops...chea.

[Stress]

ok..that was my other guess...so either way i had it right..lol

[Exis]

and for dumbs asses that think I am speakin' to myself up in here....Eko departed us recently and this thread...pay your respects to a worthless piece of crap kids...

[JøëL..]

def nice i like the vocab and the flow was flawless by all means neccasary man ..def did a number on this one good piece and well worded we should collab..

[DvS]

the flow wasnt the best and i had to read sum of lines twice to get the ryme, but keep workin on it, ul get there. but pretty mint

[Stress]

^^^get there.. wat?..exis is already there one of my fav writers

[DvS]

^^^get there.. wat?..exis is already there one of my fav writers

thats ur opinion

[Stress]

u need a better one

[Exis]

lmao at this PMS herb , nigga wish he could key like that...it's always been stated by established heads that basic cats can't catch my unique flow...until you do don't step to my thread let alone vent jest comments in it...

[Sev]

bump

[JayCee]

this was cool. vocab was nice. flow was up and down. some good lines in there. nice drop.

[Blacketh.]

lol @ "step to my threads"

among other shit.

coo verse.

[Marleny]

Very nice one

[Goon]

ahahahahaa @ whoever upped this old post! It's actually not that bad, not the best I've read by Exis but another solid showing no doubt. Feeling the flow to it more than anything, there were a few lines that were out by a couple syllables or so but nothing really major. Those long lines did make some of it read a little choppy but not enough to really take away from it. This was pretty good, I thought I replied to it at RF but possibly not, stay up man.